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The Truth

Nataz Lou

1

It has been 2 weeks since Steph left for her trip with Alex. Max is feeling pretty down as he should have told her how he felt for her. Max decides to go out and collect his post.

He walks outside.

Max hears a murmur of a bike. He just ignores it, not thinking that it was Steph’s bike. Suddenly around the corner appeared a bike. It looked very similar to Steph’s. Max looked up. The person on the bike had a helmet on so he couldn’t see who it was. Suddenly the person took of their helmet. STEPH......

Max. Steph, what are you doing here?

Steph. Oh I didn’t really enjoy it there.

Max. Why's that?

Steph. Because I didn’t love Alex.

Max. Really.

Steph. I pretended to myself that I did love him but deep down I had feelings for someone else.

Max looks up.

Max. Who was that then?

Steph walks towards him.

Steph. I don’t think I need to tell you......

She goes in for the big one...........

2

 
It has been 3 mins and they are still going for it. Max has reacted well to Steph’s gesture.

Steph is the one who finally has to gasp for air. They both have their arms around each other.

Steph. I’m sorry if you didn’t want me to do that but..........

Max. Don’t be silly, did you come back just for me?

Steph. Yes

Max. I was feeling so down, I wanted to tell you how I felt about you but I never got around to it.

Max. Do you want to come in.

They both feel embarrassed.

Steph. I have got to go and see mum and dad now, but I can meet you later.

Max. Ok

Steph. I will ring you.

Max. See you later.

Steph. Bye

Steph walks up towards her house, Max walks into his house with a huge grin on his face.

3

A while later and Max still has the huge grin on his face.

At the Hoylands.

Summer. What’s up with the big smile.

Max. Nothing I’m allowed to smile.

Summer. Ok then.

Summer looks outside the window.

Summer. Wow.

Jumps on her dad.

Max. What summer?

Summer. Steph’s back.

Max. Is she!!

Summer. You don’t look too surprised. Is that why you’re smiling because Steph’s back.

Max. Don’t be silly summer.

Max's mobile rings. He picks it up.

Max. Hi........at the lake...sure...what time.....7........ok then....bye.

Summer. Who was that dad.

Max. Lou, I need to talk to him.

About 6.45 max leaves but little does he know, summers following him.

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Max has left to go to the park to meet Steph, little does he know, Summer is following close behind.

At the park.

Summer hides behind a bush.

Steph. Hi.

Max. Hi, how is it going?

Steph. Fine.

Max. Was it good to see you parents…

They both wanted a repeat of this afternoon but they were both to embarrassed till Max plucked up the courage and grabbed her by the hips and they finally did what they both wanted to do. (be together)

Summer. Yessssssssssssss

Max. Did you hear something.

Steph. Yeah.

They walked hand in hand around the park looking for the source of the noise.

Steph. I think I have found the problem, hi Summer.

Summer. Hey Steph.

Max. What are you doing here.

Summer. I followed you, I knew you were meeting Steph.

Steph laughs.

Summer. And I saw everything.

Max. What.

Steph. Oh well.

Steph. As long as she doesn’t tell anyone it doesn’t matter.

Max. Ok, summer you wont tell anyone will you?

Summer. No.

Steph. Promise.

Summer. I do.

Max. Ok then.

Will she keep it to herself or will she blabber?

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Summer has just become aware of Max and Steph’s unexpected snog.

Back at the Hoyland’s Summer and Boyd are in bed. Max and Steph are talking on the sofa.

Max. So what’s gonna happen from now.

Steph. I don’t know?

Max. Did you tell Alex why you were leaving?

Steph. Yeah.

Max. How did he take it?

Steph. Well, he isn’t returning to Ramsey Street so I think we are clear of him.

Max. Good.

Steph. Why do you say that?

Max. Because the last thing we want is him coming back and blabbing his mouth.

Steph. Are you ashamed for people to know that we kissed?

Max. No, but people might get the wrong idea of me and you.

Steph. Is there a me and you?

Max. I want there to be, do you?

Steph. Yeah, I want to be with you so much, it’s just the reaction of the others that might break us apart as a couple and maybe even friends. I don’t know if I am willing to risk things with my family and you don’t want Boyd to take it badly.

Max. Boyd would come around and what would your family have against it.

Steph. Well, you are mates with my dad, how would he feel if me and you were together?

Max. Well maybe it would be better.

Steph. How?

Max. Well you would be with someone he knows well and he would maybe feel safer with you and me than with you and someone he has never met before. It’s not like me and your dad have ever fallen out....

Steph. ...Only when he caught you perving over the fence?

Max. I wasnt perv........

Steph. I know, but I bet you got a good look?

Max. No I didn’t.

(they both laugh)

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They are still on the sofa.

Max. So we have decided that its best if we don’t get together.

Steph. Yes

Max. I wish we didn’t have to do this

Steph. Me too. But it’s for the best. Isn’t it?

Max. I suppose so.

Steph. I best be going......

Max. Ok then, I spose I will be seeing you tomorrow at the pub.

Steph. You make it sound like I’m an alcoholic.

Max. Well you are a bit.

Steph. I always have an orange juice, nothing else.

Max. Yeah........

(laughing)

Steph. I best go now then

Max. OK

They both walk to the door.

Max. I will still love you

Steph. Me too.........

Steph walks of with tears in her eyes. No snogs today then.

7

 
The morning after the disastrous decision.

Max leaves the house and gets in his car. Steph comes out to get the post and they see each other Max smiles and Steph smiles back. Max stays and looks at her for a while. He thinks (how can she look so beautiful in the morning.) He starts up his car and drives away.

Steph walks inside she has a shower and she gets ready. She goes and meets Libby and Ben and they make their way down to the pub. (They let Ben in as he is the owner’s godson.)

Libby. Hi max. Can we have two coke and bacardi's and one water (for Ben.)

Max. Sure

Steph looks up and her and Max glance at each other again. Libby notices the tension.

The drinks are on the table.

Libby. What’s going on?

Steph. Nothing

Libby. I take it you have told Max how you feel.

Steph. Yeah, and more.

Libby. More......

Steph. We snogged each other. Twice.

Libby. Oh, I’m so happy for you both, but why do you both look like you are upset.

Steph. We decided its best if we don’t get together for Boyd and my family’s sake.

Libby. Your giving up on the man you love because someone might get upset.

Steph. Libby its not that simple.....

Libby. Yes it is. I say go for it with Max. He is a lovely guy.

Libby gets up and talks to Max. Steph is worried at what she is saying but she doesn’t really care.

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Continuing..............

Libby is talking to Max when Steph gets up and walks out.

Max chases after her.

Max. Steph.

Steph. Please leave me alone.

Max. What’s wrong.

Steph. I know I can’t be with you, but if I can’t be with you my life isn’t worth living.

Max. Look Steph...

Steph. Please max.................

She walks off.

Where is she going. Will she come back?

9

 
2 weeks after the last update and Steph has been missing all this time. Everyone knows about Max and Steph. The police are helping. The day of the police search.

Police man. Yes, today we will search the nearby park and lake.

Max. Lake.

Joe. Why the lake? She wouldn’t.........

Lyn is still crying.

Police man. You can help us if you want.

Max and Joe both offer to help.

Police man. The lake is being checked now.

Max. When can we find out that it is clear.

Police man. Well, if you want to come with me, I am going to the scene now.

Max. Yeah

Joe. Max, you can go, but ring us.

Max. Ok

They leave.

Will Steph’s body be found?

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The Lake.

Max. Is it clear.

Police man. No, there is a young woman’s body.

Max looks down, trying to hold in the tears.

Police man. It is very possible that its not Steph’s body.

Max. How long will it take.

Police man. Well it is not been there very long. You can identify it now. It is not very decomposed.

Max. Yes, I will look now.

The police man escorts him to the body. Max takes a look.

Max. It’s not her,

Police man. Are you sure.

Max. I’m sure, it’s not her.

Police man. Ok

Max walks away and rings the Scully’s. He tells them the update.

A police man runs over. They think they have found her, she’s alive.

Max. Where.

Police Man. She was found very drunk and also she had a photo of a man. She wouldn’t let it go when she went to the hospital.

Max. What hospital.

Police man. Erinsborough.

Max rings the Scully’s and tells them the good news. He makes his way to the hospital.

Max walks into the room she is in.

Max. Steph, how are you.

Steph. I’m sorry.

Max. What were you thinking, we thought you were dead.

Steph. I wish I was.

Max. Don’t say that, why did you do it?

Steph. I don’t know, I have never loved someone like I love you, I couldn’t live without you anymore.

Max. I love you Steph. I was so worried I thought I had lost you forever.

The Scully’s enter and Max leaves later.

He returns later.

He looks at the table where a photo of him was.

Max. Steph.

Steph. You have been here all evening, get some rest.

Max. They say you can come home tonight.

Steph. Good, but mum and dad have gone home.

Max. I know, they said that you could stay with me, if you wanted.

Steph. Really, would you mind, what about the kids.

Max. They are with Libby tonight.

They leave the hospital.

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They arrive at Max’s house.

Max. Do you want a drink?

Steph. I will have a water please.

Max. A water!

Steph. Yes, I have had enough alcohol to do me a lifetime.

Max. Are you tired, do you want anything to eat?

Steph. God, you are like my mum, stop fussing and sit down with me.

Max. Sorry

Steph. I know you are only trying to help but I’m fine now.

Max. I can’t carry on denying my feelings for you. Everyone knows about us, why can’t we try Steph.

Steph. I want to try, I have decided that I don’t care what people think.

Max. Ok then. So were gonna try it. See how it goes.

Steph. Yeah.

Max. Do you want to go in my bed and I will sleep on the sofa.

Steph. Ok.

They kiss and they part.

12

Later that Night

CONTINUED..................

Steph wakes up and walks into the front room where Max is lying down. He isn’t asleep.

Max. Are you ok?

Steph. Yeah, just wanted to see you.

Max. Well here I am, come in with me if you want.

Steph gets in the sofa bed with Max.

Steph. What a day.

Max. Tell me about it. We will forget it happened.

Steph. Yeah, I don’t want to remember those two weeks of my life.

Max. Steph you’re so cold.

Steph. I know.

She snuggles up to Max.

Steph. You don’t mind do you?

Max. Of course I don’t.

They both fall asleep.

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The Morning.

Max wakes up, Steph is not next to him. She appears around the corner with a tray with some breakfast on.

Max. Breakfast in bed what did I do to deserve this.

Steph. You found me.

Max. I’m glad I did.

He eats it and then gets ready for work.

Max. What are you doing today?

Steph. I’m going to Libby’s.

Max. So I will call you later then.

Steph. Please do.

He kisses her and leaves.

14

Max is at the pub.

Max. Hey Lou.

Lou. Hi, How’s Steph?

Max. I think she’s fine.

Lou. You think, it is so clear that you two are together.

Max. Lou, keep it down.

Lou. So has she stayed at yours yet?

Max. Yes, why do you ask?

Lou. Just that when people stay something usually happens between them.

Max. Well that’s not the case.

Lou. Don’t deny that you don’t want too.

Max. Lou........

Lou. What, she’s a pretty girl.

Max. I know.

Lou. Good, make sure she knows that.

What will Max do to show Steph he loves her.

15

Max is on the phone.

Max. Yes.....Scully.......Steph.....In Ramsey Street....ok, thanks.

Lou. Who was that.

Max. I was just ordering something for Steph.

Lou. Good, son.

Later that day.

Scully’s House.

Knock at the door.

Steph answers.

Steph. Hello.

Lady. Hello.

She hands over a massive bunch of flowers.

Lady. Here’s the card.

Steph takes the flowers and card and thanks the lady. She comes back inside and sits down to read the card.

It Reads. "To Steph, I just wanted to show you how much I care for you and love you. Come over and see me at about 7.00. I have a surprise for you. Lv Max"

Steph. How sweet is he.

Later that evening Steph makes her way over to the Hoyland house.

What’s Max's surprise?

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Hoyland House.

Steph. Hi.

Max. Hi.

Steph. Thanks so much for my flowers, they are lovely.

Max. That’s fine.

Steph. So what’s this surprise?

Max guides her into the front room where there is a candle lit dinner.

Steph. This looks lovely.

Max. Thanks.

They both sit down and eat the meal.

Max. Was it ok.

Steph. It was lovely.

Steph. Well I do have a surprise for you.

She leans over and they snog passionately. Max undoes Steph’s top and it carries on from there.

Will they think it is a mistake in the morning or not?

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Morning Afta.

Max. Steph, wake up.

Steph. What, why.

Max. I just needed to tell you I’m going to work now, and I really enjoyed last night.

Steph. Me too, please don’t go to work.

Max. Why?

Steph. Because I want you to stay here with me.

Max. Really, ok I will do a sickie

Steph jumps up and hugs Max.

Steph. I will just get dressed. Is it ok if I have a shower?

Max. Sure, I might join you.

Steph. Ok, see you in a minute.

Steph and Max have a shower and they leave in the car for the shopping mall.

What happens while their shopping.

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SHOPPING TRIP

Max. The kids are coming home at about 5.30 so I need to be home by then.

Steph. Are you gonna tell them about us.

Max. Yes, well Summer already knows so its just Boyd.

Steph. Oh, I love that top. I have to try it on.

Max. Go on then.

She tries on the top and then decides to buy it. She then tries on a Bikini.

Max. Uuuummmmmmmmmmmmmm, get that. It looks nice on you.

Steph. You reckon.

Max. Yeah, How much is it?

Steph. 90. I know its expensive but my nan left me loads of money.

Max. Can’t wait to go to the beach with you then.

They shop for a while longer and both buy a lot more stuff. They return home. Steph leaves him to tell Boyd.

How will he take it?

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Max. Look Boyd. I need to tell you something.

Boyd. If its about you and Steph, I already know.

Max. How...oh Summer.

Max. Look, I need you to know...

Boyd. I don’t really care if you and Steph are together.

Max. Really.

Boyd. Yeah, I mean she is so hot and when Daniel comes round it will be great fun.

Max. As long as there is no perving in the shower again.

Boyd. That’s not fair. I bet you get to see it all and we don’t even get a look in...

Max. Boyd stop it.

Boyd. Ok sorry.

Max. So you’re fine with it then.

Boyd. Yeah.

Max. Good.

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Max. He was fine about it

Steph. Really

Max. Your family, they already know, don’t they?

Steph. Yes, They were a doddle. Are you working tonight?

Max. Yeah, I am. Will you come down and see me?

Steph. Yeah

Max. What’s wrong, you sound down.

Steph. I just have a bit of a headache.

Max. Oh darling, why don’t you go to bed. You don’t have to come and see me if you’re unwell.

Steph. No I want to.

Max. Ok then I will see you later.

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2 months later. Steph is visiting Max in the pub. She feels unwell. She decides to rest in the back of the pub and wait for Max to finish his shift. Max is dealing with all the customers.

Max. Hi Karl.

Karl. Hi Max, can I have a lager.

Max. Sure.

Max gets the lager and starts talking to Karl.

Karl. Where’s Steph?

Max. She’s out the back, she feels sick again.

Karl. Do you want me to take a look at her for you?

Max. Would you?

They walk out the back and Karl and Steph have a chat. As he walks out he discusses it with Max. What is the verdict?

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The Verdict......

Max. So what is it?

Karl. I’m not sure.

Max. Well, she is nearly always ill now.

Karl. I am not 100% sure but is she sick every morning?

Max. Not every morning, but when she is sick it is in the morning.

Karl. Is it possible she may be pregnant.

Max. Pregnant.....................

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Max. Pregnant...

Karl. I can run tests. I’m not saying it’s definite, but it is a possibility.

Max. Does she know this is what you think?

Karl. No, maybe you should talk to her about it.

Max. Ok, I will speak to you soon, thanks.

Karl. All part of the service.

Karl sits down and drinks his larger.

Later that night Steph and Max are in the car driving to get some petrol.

Max. I spoke to Karl.

Steph. Yeah what did he say?

Max. He said there is a possibility that you are pregnant.

Steph. Pregnant…

Max. I know, shock init.

Steph. I can’t be, I mean we used protection.

Max. I know but its not 100% safe is it.

Steph. Well I need to buy a test then.

Max. Yeah, we can buy one at the garage.

Steph. Ok then.

They go to the garage and get the test they drive back.

Steph. I can’t come in and do it if the kids are there.

Max. Is anyone in at yours.

Steph. No, I don’t think so, I think they went to see Valda and stay at hers tonight.

Max. So shall we go to yours then.

Steph. OK

They both walk up to Steph’s and Steph goes in the bathroom.

Steph is in there a while when she calls Max. Max walks in.

Max. Is it positive or negative?

Steph...............................

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Negative or Positive?

Steph. It’s Negative.

Max. Oh, ok.

Steph. Is that good or bad news?

Max. I’m not sure.

Steph. I’m surprised, I am a bit upset in a way I wanted it to be positive.

Max. Me too.

Steph. We have loads of time for that I spose.

Max. Yeah, sure.

Was the test right?

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Is it right or wrong?

A few days on.

PUB.

Max. Hi babe, what’s wrong, are you still feeling ill?

Steph. Yeah, every morning I’m sick. It’s really getting me down.

Max. Maybe we should go to see Karl we never know the test might be wrong.

Steph. Maybe, I will go and see him now. He told me he had no appointments this morning.

Max. Do you want me to come with you?

Steph. I’m ok, I will call you later, ok

She gives him a kiss and as she starts to walk out she collapses.

Max. Steph. Are you ok.

He runs over and helps her up.

Steph. Yes, owwwwwwwwww

Max. What is it?

Steph. I have a pain in my stomach.

Max. I am taking you to Karl now.

Max. Lou, will you take over.

Lou. Of course son.

They leave and go to the surgery.

What’s wrong with Steph?

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At the surgery.

Karl. Ok Steph, just get up onto the bed.

Steph. Owwwwwwwww.

Karl. Is the pain there.

He feels her stomach

Steph. Yeah.

Karl. Do you mind if I have a feel around on your stomach.

Max. No, it’s fine.

Karl. I meant Steph.

Steph laughs.

He feels around.

He looks up with a slight grin on his face.

Max. What is it?

Karl. You’re pregnant

Steph. What.

Karl. Yes, about 2 months I’d say.

Max. That’s about right.

Karl. I take it you’re the daddy

Max. Yes

Steph. Are you sure? (still shocked)

Karl. Yes, 100% sure

Max. Wow, I don’t know what to say.

Karl. Well congratulations to the pair of you. I will leave you to talk.

Steph. Thanks.

Karl exits.

Steph. Oh my god, a baby. I don’t know if I’m ready.

Max. It is up too you.

Steph. No max, I think its fair if we both choose.

Max. Ok, at the same time we both say either yes/no to if we want to have a baby.

Both. Yes.......

Steph. Ok, If your sure.

Max. Only if you are?

Steph. Oh my god, I’m gonna be a mum.

Max. I’m gonna be a dad, again.

Max. I am happy we are gonna keep this baby.

Steph. Me too. I love you.

Max. I love you too.

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Steph and Max are expecting a baby. (Not them both)

Max. Steph.

Steph looking at baby clothes in the shop.

Steph. What darling?

Max. Would you move in with me and the kids.

Steph. Really, Well I don’t know what to say?

Max. How about... yes.

Steph. Yes, but what about the kids.

Max. Well summer will love having another lady in the house and Boyd would love you to be around so he can show you off to all his friends.

Steph. Ok then, when.

Max. Now. Today. Whenever.

Steph. How about I start moving my stuff today and actually move in tomorrow.

Max. Sounds great.

They finish shopping. They have spent so much on the baby clothes. Now for the tricky bits. Telling the families.

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The day of moving in. Steph has told her family about the baby and they have taken it surprisingly well. Also the news of the move wasn’t such a big shock. But how will the Hoyland kids take the news.

Summer. A Baby.

Boyd. For real.

Max. Yes. What do you think.

Both. Cool, really.

Max. Oh that’s a relief. And there’s more.

Summer. Are you getting married.

Max. Not quite. Steph is moving in with us tonight.

Boyd. Really (in a perverting voice)

Max. Yes, is that ok

Summer. Oh that is gonna be so cool, we can all go out and have barbies out the back, like a real family.

Max. Yes, so it’s ok then.

There is a knock and it’s Steph. Summer gives her a hug and gives her a bunch of flowers.

Steph. Thanks Summer.

Summer. Congratulations.

Boyd. Yeah, you having a shower.

Summer. Shut up you pervert.

Max. Boyd if I catch you sneaking in there while Steph’s in the shower or bath .........

Boyd. Oh I get it for you eyes only.

Max. Exactly.

They all laugh

Will Steph settle in.

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Summer. So what’s for dinner dad.

Max. I thought we would go down the beach and have fish and chips.

Steph. Sounds good.

Max and Boyd take their boards and stuff while Steph and Summer get their bikinis together.

They arrive at the beach. Max and Boyd go straight into the sea. Steph and Summer (in their bikinis) sunbathe and chat.

Summer. You’re really pretty.

Steph. Thanks, so are you.

Summer. Really.

Steph. Yeah, you’re lovely.

Summer. My dad really loves you.

Steph. I know, and I love him too, lots.

Summer. Steph, yeah do you want to have a go on the surfboards.

Steph. Yeah sure.

They go in the sea and go on the boards. Summer and Steph are better than Max and Boyd. GIRL POWER

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The next day.

 
Steph and Max both go and pick up Summer from school.

When they arrive at the gates Hayley’s (bully) mum is shouting at Summer.

Max. Hey what’s going on.

Hayley’s mum. This little brat has been horrible to my daughter.

Max. If um correct it was your daughter who was bullying Summer while she was on her paper round.

Hayley’s mum. This little brat.......

Steph. Do you mind calling her a brat, can’t your daughter fight her own battles.

Hayley’s mum says to Max. Oh is this your bit of stuff.

Steph. What did you say?

Max. Leave it Steph.

Steph. No, first you called Summer a brat and now your saying stuff about me. Why doesn’t your daughter stop bullying Summer and then it will all be over.

Hayley’s mum. Hayley, why don’t you hit that little brat Summer.

Steph. She can try it but somehow I think that if she does Summer would win.

Max. I think she could aswell.

Hayley. Come on mum, let’s leave.

Hayley’s mum. Yeah it’s not worth wasting your fist on love, lets go home.

Steph. No if she won’t fight Summer, how about I fight you, you scumbag.

Hayley’s mum. Don’t be stupid.

Steph. I aint stupid

Hayley’s mum. Stupid cow.

Steph hits the mother around the face.

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Max. Come on girls let’s leave.

Summer. Ha ha ha.

Hayley’s mum. Next time I see you.........

Steph. Keep it shut.

They leave to walk to the car when the head teacher, Miss Barkingham, comes after them.

Teacher. Summer, come here.

Steph. No it was my fault. If you need to talk to someone talk to me.

Teacher. And who may you be.

Summer. That’s my step mum.

Max. Summer........

Steph. Look she provoked me. She was calling me and Summer names. No one calls me names and gets away with it.

Teacher. Ok then. Summer apologise to Hayley.

Max. She isn’t apologising. She has done nothing to Hayley.

Steph. Hayley has been bullying Summer.

Teacher. Just apologise Summer.

Summer. No. I’m sick of being the one who always gets picked on.

Steph. Come on let’s leave.

Max. Yeah finally.

They start to walk away.

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That night summer asks Steph to tuck her into bed. (even though she's a bit to old for it)

Steph. So what are we gonna do tomorrow on your day off.

Summer. Don’t know

Steph. Ok then, night. See you in the morning.

Kisses Summer goodnight.

Summer. Thanks for today, that girl is such a bully.

Steph. That’s alright. I don’t think she will be bothering you anymore.

They say goodnight and Steph goes outside and sits down with Max.

Max. Hey Rocky.

Steph. Don’t take the mick.

Max. I have to work tomorrow.

Steph. Ok. Do you want me to take the kids out.

Max. If you want, but Daniel’s coming over.

Stephs. That’s ok.

Max. I know they want to go to the beach. Would that be ok.

Steph. Yeah, me and Summer can go surfing again.

Max. I will give you some money for lunch and that..........

Steph. No, I will pay for everything.

Max. Are you sure. Look I don’t want you to do too much, not in your condition.

Steph. Don’t start. I’m fine. I don’t feel any different. I haven’t put any weight on. But apparently according to Libby you don’t in the first 4 months.

Max. I don’t care if you have a bump. I will always love you.

Steph. Well, that makes me feel a lot better.

Max. Do you want a drink.

Steph. Yeah please. Can I have a white wine.

Max. No, It’s not good for you.

Steph. One wont hurt.

Max. Ok.

He goes and fetches the drink. What happens at the beach.

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In the morning they all wake up and Max walks to work. Steph uses his big car so she can drive all the kids to the beach.

In the car. They have just picked up Daniel.

Steph. Hi Daniel.

Daniel. Hi Steph, congratulations on your news.

Steph. Thanks mate.

After a 15 mins drive they arrive at the beach they all get changed.

The boys are ready sitting on the beech then Summer and Steph walk out of the changing rooms both looking stunning.

Daniel. Your step mum is gorgeous. I wish I was living at yours again.

Boyd. I know, she is so fit.

Steph and summer arrive at the pitch on the beach where they are sitting.

Steph. So are we going in.

Summer. Yeah.

They all go in the water and Boyd and Daniel take in their boards.

They stay in for a long time then Steph spots Max at the top of the beach looking over.

Steph. Hey, shall we go and see your dad.

Summer. Yeah.

All four of them get out the water and go and see Max.

Steph. Hi darling.

Max. Hey babe.

They kiss.

Boyd whispers to Daniel. How lucky is he?

Max. I heard that.

Steph laughs.

Steph. Did you get off early.

Max. Yeah, I have the rest of the day off.

Summer. Dad, are you coming in the water.

Max. Too right.

Max gets ready. Don’t worry he’s not wearing tight trunks he is wearing some shorts.

He is looking really sexy.

They all go in the sea. Steph gets out a bit later. As she is way too cold.

Max follows and then the kids come out.

Max. So shall we go home then.

Boyd. Ok.

They leave the beach and head home. Do they know what is in store for them when they arrive home?

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They are driving into Ramsey Street.

Max. Oh my god hide me.

Steph. What is it.

Max. Joanne, she’s outside my door.

Steph. Right.......

Max. Steph no, you have already had a fight with that girls mum.

Daniel whispers to Boyd. There might be some action.

Max. She doesn’t know about me and you.

Steph. Well we should just act normal and pretend she’s not there.

Max. Yeah ok, kids, we all just walk straight in the house don’t look at her.

Steph. Yeah ok. After 3.

Max. 1,2,3 go, go, go.

They all leave the car.

Joanne. Max. Whooooo, oh hello Steph.

Steph. Look we’re in a rush.

Joanne. We’re.

Max. Come on Steph.

Steph. Yes were together.

Max. Come on Steph, leave it.

Steph walks in the house leaving Joanne outside screaming abuse about Steph and Max. Libby comes out of her house and tells Joanne where to go. Joanne leaves.

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A Few Months On.

Steph is now 8 months pregnant.

In the pub.

Max. Steph could need me at any time Lou, if I need to rush off you won’t mind will you.

Lou. No, course I don’t mind.

Max. Thanks.

Lou. You didn’t have to come into work today.

Max. I just annoy Steph when I fuss around her, it’s the hormones you see they are so strong.

Lou. I remember Cherl. She had the worst temper. But you can’t stop loving her.

Max. Oh I will never stop loving her.

Max. She is really worried about the birth, she is so young.

Lou. She will be fine.

Later that day they all sit down for a break at the pub. Max’s mobile rings.

Max. Yeah ok, I will be there in 10 mins thanks.

Lou. Is it good news.

Max. Yeah she’s in the hospital now.

Max rushes to the hospital. When he arrives. He finds Lyn and Joe in the canteen.

Max. Where is she. Is she ok?

Lyn. Max, were so sorry.......

Max. What, what’s happened.

Joe. She’s lost the baby.

Max. Oh god no, is she ok.

Lyn. She’s terrible.

Lyn hugs Max.

Max. Where is she.

Lyn. In that room over there.

Max makes his way over to the room.

He walks in.

What happens next.

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Max walks in to find Steph crying and there is a doctor.

Max. Oh Steph.

He hugs her.

The doctor feels around Steph’s stomach.

Doctor. There’s a pulse. The baby’s ok. But we need to deliver now.

Lyn and Joe are told.

Doctor. Steph, who would you like in with you.

Steph. My boyfriend, Max.

Max. Ok here goes.

Doctor. Push.

Max. Go on darling. Push hard.

After 2 hours baby Charlie is born.

Steph is tired and Max is over the moon. The Scully’s, Summer and Boyd visit her and Charlie.

Max. Come on kids lets let Steph sleep. She must be tired.

Steph. I’m not tired.

Max. Not much........

Steph. Can you stay with me Max.

Max. Yeah sure, I was going to.

Steph. Bye kids, thanks for the flowers.

She kisses them goodbye. Rosie comes in and meets her grandson and then she takes the kids home.

Steph. I can’t believe I have had a baby.

Max. I know, we are gonna be so happy.

Gradually Steph falls asleep. Max stays there next to her all night.

 

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