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Set: coffee shop.

Characters: Taj, Michelle and Lori

Taj: Why did she dump me? I loved her like crazy. I hope it wasn't another man.

Michelle: Taj i hate to tell you this but it was.

Lori: No way. Oh i am so sorry Taj. I dont know how a gorg boy like you could be dumped like that. i dont know what i would do if Jack dumped me.

Taj: So then who is the other man?

Michele: I cant tell you. I dont know.

Lori: Chelle i can tell when you are lying!

Michelle: Dont worry about it you dont need to know.

Taj: Tell me Chelle i wont hurt him.

Michelle: Right it 's Jack

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Taj: What? no not Jack i'm going to punch him.

Lori: Not if i do it first. How could he i loved him.

(Taj and Lori run out of the coffee shop Michelle follows)

Set: Scully's house.

(Taj knocks the door. Jack answers in his dressing gown)

Taj: You b******.

(Lori punches Jack in the mouth)

Jack: What did you do that for?

Lori: Dont try mr nice with me.

(Nina enters the room with a towel wrapped round her)

Nina: Jack come back to bed. Oh my god Taj! Lori!

Taj: Nina you've broken my heart. I never want to see you again.

Jack: Well that would be a little bit difficult you go to the same school.

Lori: Dont joke Jack. You've taken me and Taj as fools. Doing dirty stuff behind our backs.

Nina: Look i wanted to end the affair but jack found me irresistible.

(Michelle enters)

Michelle: Okay then lets just make friends.

Lori: No way Nina you've ruined my life.

(Lori runs full speed into Nina and they start having a fight. At the same time Taj and Jack also do.)

Michelle: Everyone stop fighting. I got an announcement to make.

(Everyone stops fighting)

Michelle: I am pregnant

Credits role.

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Nina: Who's is it?

Michelle: Connors duh.

Jack: God i think she is turning into a slapper.

Lori: Yeh i mean she kept an important secret from me. I aint talkin to any of you except Taj.

Nina: I think it is brill you are having a baby.

Jack: Nina will you still love me?

Nina: I will never stop loving you.

Lori: How about me. Dont you love me Jack

Nina: You actually think jack loves you. I mean you are so annoying.

Taj: Dont worry Loz i i love you.

Credits role.

4

3 months later.

Hospital Michelle scanning for her baby

Michelle: I really need the loo.

Nurse: Sorry Michelle you need to drink more water.

Connor: I cant wait to see our baby.

Lori: Yeh Michelle you know i never forgave you for not telling us about Jack and Nina's affair well i will forgive you if you let me and Taj be godparents.

Michelle: Yeh sure.

(Nina and Jack come into the room holding hands)

Taj: Oh look here come the cheating couple

Jack: Oh look there is the feel sorry for each other couple.

Taj: Want a fight

Connor: Look you two stop it.

Michelle: Yeh stop it i dont want my baby's godfathers fighting okay?

Jack: Oh wow i can't believe it i am its uncle and godfather.

Nurse: Michelle you can have your scan now.

(Nurse looks at the computer in shock.)

Nurse: Michelle you are expecting triplets.

Connor: Oh my god

Credits roll.

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Michelle: Oh my god

Jack: Oh no! We will have four little stinky babies crawling around the house. I'm moving out.

Nina: Oh how cute

Connor: Oh Chelle you are going to be a brill mum.

Lori: Chelle these kids are going to take control of your life. No school. No exams. No job. No money

Jack: Oh look at me Lori Lee i think i know everything.

Michelle: Shut up Jack. Lori is right. Should i have an abortion?

Connor: No way Chelle. i will leave you. An abortion is like murdering someone.

Michelle: Yeh i know but what about me what about my life. Huh.

Connor: What do you want to do about it.

Michelle: Keep them. No! Yes! No! Yes! Oh i dont know

Credits role

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Michelle: Connor i will keep the babies if you help me look after them

Connor: Of course i will. I know me and Joe can be the house husbands.

Jack: Yeh and i can be the house uncle.

Taj: Yeh, sure whatever.

Connor: We are having a party at the lake tonight all of you come.

All: Yeh. Cool. Ace.

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Set: Lake

Taj: Lori you know i really love you.

Lori: Yeh i know

(Summer walks towards Taj)

Summer: Ere Taj you are the love of my life.

Taj: Hahah, really.

Credits role

7

Summer: I love you.

Jack: Hey look now Taj has his own fan club.

Taj: Shut up. Summer i love Lori not you.

Summer: But, but (runs off crying).

Lori: Hey that was a little harsh.

Nina: Don't worry she loved Darcy and Drew too

Taj: She must of been upset when Drew died then.

Jack: Yeh she was actually. Bless her.

Taj: Don't try mrs al nice with me

(Taj starts pushing Jack.)

Jack: He give it a rest mate.

SPLASH.

Taj: Hehe

Lori: I can see blood help me get him out.

Nina: Oh my god is he dead!!!!!!!

Credits

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Set: Hospital

Nina: I hope that Jack is okay

(Karl enters)

Lori: How is he?

Karl: Well good news he is alive but we don't know how much damage the blow has caused.

Nina: Oh my god.

Karl: I will tell what the tests show soon.

(Lyn and Joe enter.)

Lyn: How is he Chelle?

Michelle: He is alive but we don't no if he is okay.

Joe: Where is that Taj. I'm going to kill him.

Connor: I think that he has gone on the run.

Lyn: Oh no oow the baby's coming Joe.

Joe: Dee Lyn is going into labour.

Dee: Oh ok i'll take her to the ward

Joe: I'll come with you. Chelle you stay here.

Lori: I'll come.

(10 mins later)

Karl: Michelle. I got the results of the test. I'm afraid that Jack has got a bad case of brain damage.

Credits role

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Nina: No will he remember me.

Karl: I'm sorry but no. He might think he is still in England playing football and he might be still in love with Lori.

Michelle: Oh my god what am i going to tell mum and dad.

Karl: Oh yeh he might of forgotten how to walk also.

Nina: Why?

Michelle: Can we see him.

Karl: Yes but be prepared.

Michelle: Jack do you remember me

Jack: Oh Michelle why did you wake me up. And you shouldn't come all the way to England to see me.

Michelle: Jack, you're home here.

Jack: But, but, where is Lori?

Michelle: Well Lori is with mum and dad because mum is just about to have a baby.

Jack: What? She is a little bit old. Who is that girl standing next to you?

Nina: Jack i'm your girlfriend and Lori is going out with someone called Taj. He threw you into the lake.

Jack: But i got footie training in five mins.

MIchelle: Oh yeh you dont play footie anymore.

BEEP BEEP BEEP.

Karl: You two will have to leave the room. Jack isn't breathing and has no pulse.

Credits role.

10

1 hour later

Karl: I am so sorry! We tried to save him 10 times out he didn't come back to us.

( Michelle, Lori and Nina burst out crying.)

Nina: No my love has gone forever.

(Joe enters)

Joe: Its okay now he is in peace.

(He hugs all the girls)

Michelle: Is mum okay.

Joe: Yes she has just had a baby boy.

Michelle: Well at least when someone dies a new life is brought into this world.

Connor: Yeh. He is up in heaven looking down on us.

(Taj enters)

Taj: I am so sorry. I am going to hand myself into the police.

Credits.

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Lori: Yeh i think you better. Your dumped. Although jack cheated on me i still love him.

Nina: Yeh but we will stick by you as friends.

(Lori's brother enters)

Lori: Toby!!!! You’re here

Toby: Yeh i heard what happened and i thought i'd come and comfort you.

Lori: Oh thanks. Toby this is Nina. She was Jack's girlfriend.

Nina: Hi

Toby: Hello!!

(Lyn enters)

Michelle: Oh he is so cute.

Lyn: Oh yes. A new Jack.

(Lyn, Connor, Michelle and Nina leave the room)

Toby: Well that Nina she is a saucy ladie.

[Insight to what Nina felt when Jack was dying.

Dear Diary: i don't know what to say but my beloved Jack died today. My life is not worth living. I am only half a person now. I cant believe that the man i once loved killed the person who i love now. I will never love another like Jack Scully. He was my life he was my air. I can’t live without him but i must. He'd of wanted me to. If only we had more time together if only we told Lori and Taj earlier. Please help me somebody help i plea in agony. If only i could touch him again and be with him just one last time. Answer me diary answer my prayers.]

 

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