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Since You've Been Gone

 

Cat G

 

1

Safe inside his office, Lou was in his element, counting the takings for the night. It had been a busy one, the footy fans had come in at the end of the match, and he and Max had been hard pressed to keep up. Hearing a disturbance outside, Lou groaned. More trouble, more shouting, what on earth was happening now?

“Out!! Leave NOW!! I’ve called time and you should be gone. Now go!” shouted Max, as he bundled the young man through the closing doors of the pub.

“Bu wharra but me beer” slurred the man.

“I said I’ve called time, and time means you’re gone. Finished. You had your drinking up time, and now I’m throwing you out. So go.” Yelled Max, pulling the doors shut and ignoring the thumping that followed.

“Max! What’s going on, mate? Where’s the fire?”

“It’s nothing Lou, I’d called time and he didn’t want to leave. That’s all. Now, do you need a hand or can I go?” Lou stared at him. Max had changed, had become distant, easily upset, and as his partner, Lou wanted to know why.

“No mate. What you can do is sit down and calm down. What on earth is going on? “

“Nothing Lou.” Max’s shoulders slumped. “There’s nothing wrong. Listen, I need to go, I’ll see you tomorrow. Bye” and with that, he was gone.

2

Standing outside on the verandah, the crisp night air brought Max back to earth with a bump. He’d done it again. He’d let his feelings get the better of him again. Lou hadn’t done anything wrong, nor (if he really thought about it) had the drunk customer. It was just that…………….it was just that he was so cross with himself, and it seemed he’d been taking it out on those around him.

Max shook his head, before turning and taking hold of the door handle. With only a slight pause, he went back into the pub. The only remaining light came from Lou’s office.

“I wondered how long it would take you.” Said Lou, without looking up. “Give me two seconds and then I think we need to talk.”

Max went over to the small window, his insides churning. He knew he had to talk to someone, bottling up his emotions was doing no-one any good. But whether he could say it out loud, whether he could tell Lou what lay at the root of his misery, well that was a whole other story.

From his seat at the desk, Lou studied his friend. Max was a good man, a little lonely maybe, but on the whole he was usually happy. But lately, for the past two weeks or so, well something had upset Max. He’d not been himself, not at all. Of course, he’d been very good at hiding it, but it was noticeable.

Lou finished his paperwork and turned off the computer.

“By the look on your face, I reckon we need a drink.” He said, leading Max back out into the bar. Pouring a whisky for himself and pulling a beer for Max, he set the drinks down on the bar.

“What is it Max? Something’s upset you, something’s wrong.”

“Lou, I, it’s nothing. I’m fine.” And Lou could almost see the shutters fall. Whatever it was, it had hurt Max deeply.

 

3

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“I hate to disappoint you Max, but you are about as far from fine as you can get.” Said Lou. Max studied his beer, running his finger round the edge of the glass.

For a few seconds longer, Lou watched him, before standing and moving around to the other side of the bar to rinse his glass.

“Look, Max, There’s obviously something wrong, and when you’re ready to talk, then I’m here.” He sighed as he reached for his keys, crossing to the doors, ready to lock up.

A sound behind him stopped him in his tracks.

“Sorry, mate, what was that?”

Max visibly swallowed, before repeating what he’d said.

“I miss her.”

“Miss who? “ Then Lou stopped. He knew who. It wasn’t easy losing your wife. Not easy at all, and Lou knew from experience. Cheryl had been gone for some time now, and time was a healer, but still…………………

“Max, I understand. I guess I don’t talk about it so much now, but a while ago, I lost my wife, Cheryl. She was killed in a road accident. So I do understand Max.”

Max looked up at him with a humourless smile.

“Lou, I’m sorry about your wife, mate. Oh God, now I feel even worse.” Taking a deep breath, he continued. “It’s not Claire that I miss. Although, I do miss her, but, it………it’s not Claire.”

Lou looked confused.

Max took a gulp of his beer.

“Lou, I. Oh God, this is killing me. Lou, can I talk to you? I mean, can I tell you and you not………….”

Lou looked at Max, seeing the turmoil behind the words, the despair that was so close to the surface.

“Max, talk to me. Just you and me. You need to get it off your chest, whatever it is, and I know how to listen.”

“And you won’t”

“And I won’t tell a soul. I promise. Max, what is it?”

“I miss her. I miss her so much and I never told her how I felt. I let her go and now I’ve lost her”

“Max, who? Who are you talking about?”

Staring into his beer, Max smiled. Lou had to strain to hear what he said.

“Steph.”

4

Lou was silent, and his silence made Max look up at him.

“Steph? As in Stephanie Scully? That Steph? Alex’s Steph?”

Again Max smiled without any humour.

“The very one.”

“And you”

“I – I love her. Daft, isn’t it?”

And he finished his beer and stood up, pouring himself another. Lou reached over, placing a hand on top of Max’s.

“Max, I, I don’t think that’s the way to go. Listen, come back to my place. We can talk. You need to talk, and we need to, well to get this sorted. You love her very much don’t you?”

“Lou, I, yes, yes, I do. And I shouldn’t, it’s wrong, but I can’t help it Lou, I love her.”

They drove home in silence, Max peering out of the window and seeing nothing but Steph. Lou was still trying to take it all in. Max in love with Steph. Max and Steph. Steph.

Max sat on Lou’s couch nursing a steaming mug of black coffee. Sitting beside him, Lou waited, knowing Max would talk when he was ready.

“It wasn’t like I fell in love with her on purpose, she just kind of got to me. She was just always there, laughing, making the most of life, enjoying herself. Haven’t you noticed that? The room seems to brighten when she comes in; people sit up and take notice of things. She’s so alive, so – so beautiful” and then he came back to earth, realising where he was.

“So why didn’t you say something then?” asked Max.

“I dunno, it never seemed the right time, things always got in the way. And besides, why would she ever want me? I mean, there’s the kids, the mortgage, I’m tied to Erinsborough. She doesn’t need that – she needs someone who’s free, who can fly through life with her. “

“Alex.”

“I – yeah, I suppose so. But seeing her so – so excited, so ready to get away, it just hurt, you know? And then, when she actually left, well that kind of sealed it for me. I’ve lost her, for good. I mean who knows if she’ll even” he stood up, going over to stare out of the window again, finishing so quietly, that Lou had to strain to hear him again. “Who knows if she’ll even ever come back?”

“So, how does she feel about you? “

5

“So, how does she feel about you?”

“Me? I don’t know. She probably just sees me as a mate, as Summer’s Dad. Which is in its own way even worse. That means that I get to see a lot of her because of Summer and be in love with her at the same time. It’s like I’m rubbing my own nose in it, you know? Except that she’s not here any more, so I won’t see her and I can’t even talk to anyone about how much I’m hurting because no-one knows, except Mum, and she’s in PNG. Hey, Lou, I’m sorry, I shouldn’t be dumping all of this on you, you don’t need this. I just need to get over her and get on with my life.”

“Except you won’t.”

“Thanks Lou.”

“No, I mean it Max. You’ve got it bad. You love her way too much to forget about it.”

“Think about it Lou. She’s with Alex. Her boyfriend Alex. Remember him? She’s travelling, just like she always wanted to. Going where she wants, when she wants, with the man she wants. How much better can you get than that? I mean, she’ll be going to places like Great Keppel Island, where you can lie on the beach and watch the shooting stars. I’d love to be the one to show her that. Or visit Uluru and feel it’s power, it’s - ah he**. I don’t know why I do this to myself. It’s been eating away at me for two weeks now Lou. I just miss her so much.”

“So what are you going to do about it?”

“There’s nothing I CAN do, Lou. She made her choice, she’s happy and I, well I’ll just have to live with it.”

“Or – “

“Or nothing Lou. I can’t do that to her. I can’t disrupt her life, not now, not when she’s finally got what she deserves. I mean I know Alex loves her, you only have to watch him to know that. And she likes him. So,” he sighed, standing and giving Lou a small smile. “Anyway, Lou! It’s almost midnight, I’d better go. Listen, “

“Don’t worry, I won’t say a word. But Max, you need to talk to her, you need to let her know how you feel, who knows, maybe”

“Don’t Lou. I can’t do that to her. She deserves to be happy and she’s happy with Alex. It doesn’t matter how much I love her, that’s my problem, not hers. Good-night Lou” and with that he left a thoughtful Lou, standing in his loungeroom.

6

Steph and Alex had ridden through the night, wanting to see the sun rise at Byron Bay. Despite her initial reservations, Steph really was enjoying herself. The ‘just friends’ bit was working well and thus far Alex had not mentioned her mystery man at all. Which was just how she wanted it. Because nothing would ever come of the sparks that flew between her and Max, they’d had enough chances, but neither had had the guts to step up to the plate. So, Steph reminded herself, what she had to do was to put him out of her mind, once and for all. And she would. Eventually.

They finally arrived at Byron Bay just as the first golden rays of sunlight began appearing. Parking their bikes they stood on the beach, close together watching the sunlight cast a spell over the surroundings. Alex wrapped an arm around Steph’s shoulders, pulling her in tight to him, missing the slight hesitation she made. He turned to look at her.

“Happy?”

“Actually, yes. This trip is fantastic, Australia really is an amazing place, isn’t it?”

“Certainly is!” And he dropped a kiss on the top of her head.

Moving away from his side, Steph glanced back at him. “Alex..”

“I’m sorry Steph” putting his hands up, he smiled at her. “You can’t blame a guy for trying. This mystery guy really got to you, didn’t he ?” As he saw her face fall, he mentally chided himself. ‘Not the way to go, Alex – bide your time, she’ll come round eventually’

“Come on, let’s go and find somewhere to stay and get something to eat – I don’t know about you, but I’m starving.” And he began to wheel his bike towards the centre of town. Steph stared at his back as he walked away. Sighing, she moved over to her bike, her thoughts invading the peaceful surroundings. Max. Max Hoyland. The thorn in her side. There had been so many chances, and each of those chances had passed them by. Max Hoyland – mystery man. Shaking her head, Steph smiled slightly. Taking a deep breath, she forced herself to look forward, and not at what could (should, a small voice insisted ) have been. Wheeling her bike, she caught up with a patiently waiting Alex.

7

Two nights later, Max was once again locking up the bar. Lou had left earlier, it had been a quiet night and Max had lost the coin toss to see who got an early mark. There had been virtually no-one in the bar for the last hour and a half, and Max’s mind had once again turned to its favourite subject – a certain feisty, fascinating blonde who was far, far out of reach. Max had been torturing himself, his mind wandering through various scenarios, each of which usually ended up with him and Steph together.

Sighing sadly, he gathered up his stuff, making sure that he had his car keys ready. Stepping out onto the verandah, he put the keys in the lock, pausing for a split second as the keys refused to work. Looking down, he smiled. He’d been so lost in his thoughts he’d been trying to lock the pub with his car keys. Patting his pockets, he finally located the pub keys, turning slightly at a sound behind him.

Max never really knew what hit him, the pain was so sudden and so sharp. He dropped both sets of keys as he grabbed at his chest. Looking at his hand, his fear turned to panic as the blood dripped from his hand. As his legs gave way, a figure appeared over him.

“Won’t treat anyone else like that, will you, you b*****d! No-one chucks me out of a pub and gets away with it”

And as Max slowly lost consciousness, the last thing he saw was the slow arc of the knife as it once again descended towards him.

8

Bob was a great dog, faithful, energetic, but sometimes, just sometimes, he could be really annoying. And this was one of those times. The incessant scratching at the door, coupled with the non-stop whining had finally worked, and a miserable Toadie was taking Bob on the fastest walk of his small life.

Walking as quickly as he could, Toadie trailed Bob along behind him. Turning into the Lassiters complex, he figured that he could do a lap of the hotel grounds, let Bob do what he needed to do and still be home in time to at least see the end of the movie. Which of course wouldn’t make much sense due to Bob. Glaring down at the small fluffy bundle, Toadie was once again conned by the big brown eyes. “That’s really not fair, you know. That’s what they call being a con-dog. D’you hear that? A con-dog. And I’m not going to fall for it. We’re going home and we’re going home now.”

So saying, he picked Bob up and was about to leave, when he noticed someone sitting on the verandah of the pub. Toadie sighed. This was not what he needed. There had been a few unpleasant characters hanging around the pub, Lou had been worried, but Max had said that things would be fine, that every pub has its unsavoury characters every now and then, all of whom could be dealt with.

Holding the squirming dog under one arm, Toadie warily approached the man who was slumped on the ground. Treading carefully, so as not to startle the man, Toadie made his way forward. As he got closer, he caught sight of a familiar green shirt, sodden with blood.

Bob landed gracefully as Toadie ran forward.

“Max?”

“My God, Max, what happened?”

With shaking hands, Toadie gently opened Max’s jacket, shuddering as he saw the amount of blood that Max had lost. Grabbing his mobile, he frantically dialled 000, he voice shaking as the operator answered.

“I need, I need an ambulance, Max has been stabbed!”

After giving the address and urging them to hurry, Toadie hung up, pausing only seconds before he dialled a familiar number.

“Karl? Karl, its Toadie. Listen, Max has been stabbed”

Any trace of sleep in Karl Kennedy’s voice vanished at the words. He sat bolt upright in bed, waking Susan who groaned and turned over again.

“Karl? Karl can you hear me?”

“Toadie, Toadie, calm down! How bad is he? Have you called an ambulance?”

By now Susan was fully awake, staring at Karl, who was dressing as he spoke.

“Where are you?”

Karl grabbed his bag as he hurried out of the door. Having run all of the way to the pub, he was out of breath when he finally reached Toadie and Max. Toadie hadn’t moved Max, for fear of making things worse, and the puddle of blood around him was growing. As Karl reached down to start checking him out, he saw Max’s eyelids flutter and heard a strangled sound. Putting his ear to Max’s mouth, he managed to make out a name.

“Steph, please, need Steph, tell Steph”

The wailing sound of the ambulance was a welcome distraction, and Max was gently bundled off to the hospital, the paramedics a hive of activity over him.

 

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